Do you agree or disagree with following statement. The best way to travel is in group by a tour guide use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Many people think that it is better to travel alone. Personally, I believe that traveling in a group led by guide is better choice for me. I feel this way for several reasons, I will explore in the following essay. First of all, tour guide help to know the history and they can better guide about the location. On the other hand, when people travel alone they can forget the location and waste their time. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, I got a chance to visit New York City with my husband, It was our first visit to that city.Additionally, there was a lot of traffic over there, We were not able to find well known buildings. As we reached near time square, tour guide was telling the people where to go and how can they see famous locations. Hence, we joined that group. They stoped by every historical building and guided us. We enjoyed a lot and also gained much information about that city. If we had not joined that group, we would not have been able to get knowledge. Secondly, tour guide can help the people to have more fun and enjoyment to the people, because they know where people can eat and listen music. They can provide information about places that can be joined. For instance, when I was in college, we went to see museum, we did not know about that place. Therefore, our tour guide led us, provided us all important informations. After that he told us a well known place where we had delicious food and they played music. We had fun. If we had not joined that tour guide, we would have not been able to find these places. In conclusion, I strongly agree that traveling with tour guide is beneficial. This is because they can provide knowledge and they guide about well known
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additionally
...nd, It was our first visit to that city.Additionally, there was a lot of traffic over there,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46056782334 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37677849584 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517350157729 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3139554689 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0952380952 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132478681014 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512708514905 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056127771263 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132478681014 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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