Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people think that friends have more influence on students. Personally, I believe that students consider their teachers as role model and want to follow them in every aspect.Teachers have more influence on students lives, I feel this way for several reasons I will explore it in the following essay. Firstly, teachers are their role model and students want to imitate them. students keep following them. Additionally, they want to copy them even in dressing and style also. For instance, my six years old daughter is fan of her teacher, when she started going to school. She admired her class teacher so much. Hence, started imitating her teacher , when she came back from school, she started teaching her toys like her teacher did in school. Although, she is so little, her desire is to be a teacher in future. Obviously, she will follow her favorite teacher's style. Secondly, teachers behavior also help students to have good habits and career.Students spend their time with teachers make them mentally strong. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Few years back, when I was in school, my teacher was very nice. Furthermore, she was my favorite teacher, so kind and soft spoken. She helped students by making them understand with advise. Consequently, I learned more quickly. It also help me to change my behavior, I started helping my brother in the same manner.If I had not joined her class, I would never have been able to help others.As a result all students go much better for she is kind towards every student. In conclusion, I strongly agree that teachers have more influence on students than their friends. This is because students want to copy their teacher's style as they saw in early age and because kind and polite behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90939597315 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62645102488 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.0832081455 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23856041358 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910453682564 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812466450373 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23856041358 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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