The government can take a variety of actions to help protect the environment. Which one of the following do you think is the most important for this purpose?
Fund the research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources (solar/wind energy)
Preserve natural places like forests and protect the animals that live there
Enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by large companies
Without a shadow of a doubt, the government plays a pivotal role in environmental maintenance, and its tremendous impact on the ecological alternation is undeniable, either if it is adversely or not. An unanswered question in this area is that what is the most effective way for the government to preserve the environment. Despite all the arguments asserting an opposing view to the funding research to help environmentally friendly energy sources improve, I believe otherwise, maintaining that endeavors for supplanting our energy sources can be the most practical approach. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will explain these ideas through two compelling reasons.
First and foremost, as soon as research in friendly energy sources becomes exploitable and can be superseded with ongoing energy supplies, it diminishes air and water pollution. As a matter of fact, this replacement precludes destructive chemical compounds permeate to the atmosphere by substantially reducing the amount of fuel combustion used for transportation or other needs in this hectic life. In addition, the energy consumed by the industry will also be supplanted, which seeds the plant of fewer pollutants channeling to the water. For instance, a vehicle that works with solar or wind energy not only does discharge no hazardous waste or at least does fewer amounts, but it also is a renewable source compared to other means. As a result, there is no shortage of using these kinds of resources for a host of activities, such as industry, transportation, and indispensable daily affairs.
Another reason to be mentioned is that exerting from current energy sources that we use not only does require an arduous effort but also needs various types of equipment, which eventually harms the environment. In meticulous detail, these sources should first be detected and then extracted, which can be in either a jungle or a desert. Therefore, human activities in order to obtain these energies will adversely alter these specific environments, which might lead to the demise of an organism, or eliminate the vegetation in a forest and transform it into a desert. For example, think of a specific animal whose life relies on nutrition produced from a particular tree. If that singular tree is eliminated through the procedure of fuel extraction, this animal will no longer have food supplies, and so it will be extinct. It is crystal clear how environmentally friendly energies and their researches will help maintaining ecology.
As mentioned in previous paragraphs, we see the great importance of this option over the other choices because it covers a myriad of concerns, such as air pollution, water pollution, natural places, and a new energy source. Hence, this is an expedient and worthwhile choice for the government.
Reflecting upon all the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that the government can achieve the best outcomes by funding researchers in the realm of environmentally friendly energies on the grounds that first, it reduces the air and water pollution level, second, it preserves forests, species, and natural places.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 914, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to maintain' or 'maintain'.
Suggestion: to maintain; maintain
...energies and their researches will help maintaining ecology. As mentioned in previous pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2633.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32995951417 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07637500446 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54048582996 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 820.8 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2738755991 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.277777778 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313544543127 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949047780104 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700257120273 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173875195406 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556932335628 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 86.8835125448 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 914, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to maintain' or 'maintain'.
Suggestion: to maintain; maintain
...energies and their researches will help maintaining ecology. As mentioned in previous pa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2633.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32995951417 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07637500446 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54048582996 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 820.8 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2738755991 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.277777778 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313544543127 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949047780104 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700257120273 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173875195406 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556932335628 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 86.8835125448 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.