The government can take a variety of actions to help protect the environment. Which one of the following do you think is the most important for the nation's government to take to protect the environment?
1. Found research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar and wind energy.
2. Preserve the natural places like forests and protect that live there.
3. Enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by large companies.
There has been a huge controversy among leaders of the countries over the possible ways to protect the environment. Different leaders have proposed various solutions. However, in my opinion, the best way to protect our environment is to enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by large companies. My reasons and examples listed below with strengthen my point of view.
Firstly, our planet has been destroyed in numerous ways in the last centuries. Scientists believe that both natural and human activities have caused the major changes. However, we cannot do much about natural activities and the environment itself can take care of that. But, in order to protect earth, human activities should be under control. Factories have caused serious problems in the last centuries. Deforestation and destroying greenery areas are the result of building and construction of factories. Cutting down trees has led to many serious consequences. Trees convert Carbon-dioxide into Oxygen which is a vital element for both humans and all the living creatures on earth. We hear a lot about global warming and the depletion of Ozone layer. Scientists believe industrialization releases various gases like Carbon-dioxide and methane which are known to contribute toward global warming and Ozone depletion. Therefore, governments should enact laws to prevent companies and factories from wiping out greenery areas for their sites.
Secondly, large companies and Factories have many toxic chemicals and most of them leak the remnants of these chemicals into oceans, rivers and lakes. This can endanger the marine life and have several negative effects on environment. The polluted waters are not safe to drink or swim in and they will have negative indirect impacts on human and animals, if they eat seafood that has been polluted because of its environment. Thus, by preventing factories to leak their chemical toxic remnants into water and enforce strict laws, water pollution will be reduced.
In conclusion, air and water pollution can endanger the lives of all creatures on earth and cause significant consequences. It is our duty to keep the environment clean for the next generation and we should note when our planet is destroyed, it cannot be replaced or regained, not even in a million years.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as for', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274074074074 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.158024691358 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0913580246914 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0296296296296 0.046263068375 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0469135802469 0.0685040099705 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108641975309 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0469135802469 0.0351676179071 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84280424632 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0271604938272 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00493827160494 0.00188951952338 261% => OK
Determiners: 0.0691358024691 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0246913580247 0.0209618222197 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00987654320988 0.0139019557991 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2307.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 367.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28610354223 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386920980926 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307901907357 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223433242507 0.174417080927 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147138964578 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84280424632 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542234332425 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 59.8813628005 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4761904762 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4468801439 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.2663812119 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.83157894737 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380192001661 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.086382622327 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0751409853891 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441729650419 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158270915304 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140225375324 0.114077575197 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105645123161 0.0781384742642 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.340771939909 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0416838280043 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290704159146 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900348579676 0.0618886996521 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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