It cannot be denied that the financial support to artists may lay a burden on the governmental budget, and such a fact leads some in the society to generate the opinion that we should expose the artists to the power of the free market. Nevertheless, such an opinion needs to be scrutinized meticulously before a conclusion can be drawn. As far as social benefits, economy, and artistic creativity are concerned, I totally disagree with such a view.
First and foremost, the support to artists cannot be simply left to themselves and private parties, as art has an externality – it benefits the w...
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Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 433 350
No. of Characters: 2186 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.562 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.048 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.729 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 167 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 144 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.91 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.372 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5