How do movies or television influence people`s behaviour? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Being one of the most proliferated social topic in all human life, as far as I am concerned, is the influence of televisions and movies on the people's behavior. Considering the television or movies as the media that can portray some realistic or virtual facts to their audience, the psychological impacts cannot be neglected. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, as the anthropology findings reveal, the intrinsic nature of humans particularly in the earlier ages is to mimic some observed behaviors they experience. It is crystal clear that there is causal relationship between what they observe on the one hand and what they incline to do based on their observations and initial experiences on the other hand. For example, if children see dance movie, they want to mimic the physical behaviors in conjunction with the music casting. On contrary, some parents attribute the aggressive behavior of the children to some action and curious movies they watched. Thus, it is obvious that one of the cardinal challenge of all parents is controlling of the their children on the program they watch or the time they allocated to watch.
Aside from the point I made above, some professional movies and television programs are recognized as the media to persuade people about the current change in some general life topics such as clothing, special food, traveling, etc. For instance, there are a lot of advertisement programs which show celebrated people with particular type of cloth. Not only the television can affect general aspect of people live, but also it can be applied as the interface to contribute some political issue. For example, the effect of the media can highly be attributed as a critical tool to be successful in political elections. I strongly believe that this subject originate from the psychological affection that program makers remarkably identify the desirability of their audiences.
Taking all these perspectives into account, I can put an emphasis on the influence of the television or movies on the people's behaviors regarding the intrinsic nature of humans to mimic some observed behaviors they experience and the psychological viewpoint.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the; their
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23545706371 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94654040397 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529085872576 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9211375824 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124219564616 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464445199144 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451990029521 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092150351418 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521767925942 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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