How do movies or TV affect people?
Rapid changes and complexity of today's world represent new challenges and out new demands on the societies. Media is counted as of the utmost important alterations which plays the crucial role on people's life. Therefore, the attitude toward the influence of TV as an integral part of each media is entirely varied. A plethora of people is in a conviction that Television has incredibly positive impact on the communities. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that TV has some inevitable harmful consequences for the families. I am of the opinion that, all these views have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, undoubtedly, TV is still the most important medium, thus no one can overlook the profound impact it can have Public awareness is the primary duty of utilizing the TV. It has been applied by diverse sources - governmental or non-governmental organizations - in order to promote the knowledge of people. For instance, if particular disease becomes prevalent in specific region, all people get informed thanks to various news stations; consequently, they can take appropriate actions to prevent them from getting involved in that problem. Furthermore, getting acquainted with spectacular sites around the world is another interesting usages of TV that allows people that not only improve their information but also pass their free time in a best possible way. That is why TV has nowadays a lot of advocates, and the growing segment of people are keen to spend their extra time watching their favorite programs on TV.
Another crucial fact which should be taken into consideration is that the broad usage of TV brings its negative implications. For example, families have less conversation together as they prefer to allocate their time follow their serials. The young couple start watching TV immediately after they arrive home. Children do not spend adequate time for their assignment owing to their favorite match that is going to be shown on TV. As a result, the whole family members are not as close as they were in the past. In addition, regardless of some awareness, TV programs are not categorized for specific age groups, so the teenagers or even children at early ages can watch the programs that are not appropriate for their ages. This is an extremely vital matter that many countries are looking for finding applicable solutions to solve it.
on the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that admittedly TV affect the human's life significantly both negative and positive. It seems that if people and families control their desires to not utilize excessive of TV programs, its advantages outweighs its disadvantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251020408163 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.161224489796 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0551020408163 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0510204081633 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120408163265 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0448979591837 0.0351676179071 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90488647491 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0204081632653 0.0309702414327 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00204081632653 0.00188951952338 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.1 0.0887237588012 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0122448979592 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142857142857 0.0139019557991 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2771.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 450.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15777777778 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371111111111 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308888888889 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.22 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146666666667 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90488647491 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 74.0022630557 59.2087087015 125% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9206955774 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.55 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 53.3888888889 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.5572519084 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116517811997 0.300154397459 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0799553870498 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0514930748522 0.0752933317313 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479378453201 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10668544601 0.151897553556 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456454933982 0.114077575197 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034731987192 0.0781384742642 44% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.390215828005 0.336927656856 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0692204507563 0.067059652881 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880281732967 0.210909579961 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340608969738 0.0618886996521 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.