How do movies or TV affect people ?
Movies are popular because people are great watchers.
They like to watch other peoples' lives. They like to live
vicariously. By going to movies, we can escape our own
lives, share other people's emotions, and imagine ourselves
as someone else.
Many of our lives are not as adventurous or glamorous as
the lives in movies. We do not battle evil all day long and
then go back to our luxurious penthouse apartment. We
just go to school, do our homework, eat, talk to our
friends, and sleep. We need a little excitement in our lives
and we find excitement at the movies.
Humans are very emotional people. We all like to cry and
laugh. Fortunately, there is not much to cry about in my
life so I like to go to sad movies where my heartstrings
can be tugged. I also like to go to comedies so that I can
laugh. I tend to cry and laugh more in a dark movie theater
than I do in broad daylight.
Now I am a student, but I know someday I will be a scientist
or a politician or a famous model. When I go to the
movies, I can see my role models. I see how they act,
what they wear, how they talk. I can prepare myself for
the day when I will be like them.
Even though my life is quiet, I can go to the movies and
watch someone else's life. I can share their emotions and
their everyday life. I wonder if they would like to share
mine.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y going to movies, we can escape our own lives, share other peoples emotions, and...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., eat, talk to our friends, and sleep. We need a little excitement in our lives ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.180272108844 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.163265306122 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0680272108844 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0578231292517 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.146258503401 0.0685040099705 214% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0748299319728 0.118717715034 63% => OK
Participles: 0.00680272108844 0.0351676179071 19% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.3652480215 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0544217687075 0.0309702414327 176% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0442176870748 0.0887237588012 50% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0340136054422 0.0209618222197 162% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0204081632653 0.0139019557991 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1357.0 2387.08602151 57% => OK
No of words: 261.0 408.028673835 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19923371648 5.86048508987 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.229885057471 0.338922669872 68% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.157088122605 0.251872472559 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.088122605364 0.174417080927 51% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0689655172414 0.112833075102 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3652480215 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521072796935 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 50.2313238862 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 13.05 20.5533526081 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2614654778 48.84282405 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.85 120.699889404 56% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.05 20.5533526081 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.644075263715 39% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.5376344086 529% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 28.7588122605 45.7405998639 63% => OK
Elegance: 0.712962962963 1.45489161554 49% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133150629382 0.300154397459 44% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114559658448 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105963614295 0.0752933317313 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.716527419846 0.497263757937 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.24936506657 0.151897553556 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458426826696 0.114077575197 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418182770075 0.0781384742642 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.1017816008 0.336927656856 30% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0921656997407 0.067059652881 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454798842243 0.210909579961 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478541268548 0.0618886996521 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.