How do movies or TV influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
People found communicating a fundamental and principal need from the early ages of humans’ creation. This requirement has been especially improved by variety of medias invented during time. One the important and popular arts and technologies existed in recent decades are movies and other graphical medias. Experts believe that these products can have influence in our everyday life. Similarly, I think that this idea could be true since it may affects our relationships emotionally, socially and globally.
Emotionally, movies, TV series and other mass media productions can change our feelings about something, because they picture different people with different characters experience in numerous occasions where any of these events can trigger our memory about a similar incident happened to us if they were performed well by right cast and direction. Furthermore, we may take a lesson from them and totally ratify any of our emotional behaviors. For example, I always think about myself first rather than anyone else in my whole life. But, when I watched a beautiful movie about a mother’s last days with his son where his mom was going to die due to her sever illness, I was shocked and I just felt in that very moment that what I have done to my family and close relatives in past years. They were not my priority in any case regretfully. So these things can change you in a good way hopefully.
Socially, movies and media feeds give fresh information to their readers and followers. In the past, a letter or big events news might be delivered to other side of the country after weeks or even months, since the media coverage was weak during those days. However, social media and specifically movies and graphical arts which are followed by many of people easily transfer any news or even social messages anywhere in less than a blink. Movies can raise a nation to defend their goals or give them enough courage to almost change anything if the movies stimulate the right spot in any social community.
Globally, movies can help different people from different countries know each other. Generally, movies are the first cultural products of any state which can present their beliefs in every part of this world without any serious infrastructure. It can inspire people to do an action to save the world.
In conclusion, movies and other motion picture products have the ability to alter everything if they show the main demands of their contributers. I think that movies effect on our behavior is so crucial since it may influence our decisions in different parts and levels of our life relations.
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...parts and levels of our life relations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, well, even so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02981651376 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68231665095 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580275229358 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8621725605 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.65 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12611891895 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378775223458 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338156726365 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759191401375 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018879719793 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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