Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
As human beings we all make extensive effort to achieve special goals in our lives and it has always been a disputable issue that how should an individual reacts in case of failure. Although some people argue as if it is an undisputed truth that the fact that being successful is more significant than being calm after failure, I strongly believe that success can be obtained through defeats. Among countless reasons which can support my idea I pinpoint three most conspicuous ones through following paragraphs.
The first thing that should be considered is the fact that several defeats makes a person more persistent and powerful. A person who has not experienced a mere defeat has a more fragile character whereas an individual who has tolerated many obstacles that has clogged his path while targeting and trying for achieving a certain goal has a more rigid decision and a straightforward strategy to remove many problems that he might face. As many psychologists believe it has been attested that most of erratic persons who can't definitely make sure of they really want are among wealthy families who prevented any thing that could endow their child with sense of failure.
The second reason that is worth bearing in mind is that controlling one's anger and sadness can help the person turning his negative feelings into a useful and constructive reasons for preventing future failures. As it can be testified from the noteworthy meaningful statistics which states that about fifty five percent of most money making and well known factories in the Australia has experienced a bankruptcy for a short amount of time before they established the new company, ranging between two and three and a half years.
Last but not least refers to the fact that in our hectic lives that is full of stress and pressure besides many in vain or successful results, nothing is worth to endanger our mental and physical health. According to a disappointing report from hospitals of Sidney, most of the heart and brain attacks are due to stress. As human beings, people try to achieve certain goals to enjoy their lives in the future but by considering these kinds of reports, it seems that they destroy their future and make us to think of whether they have any future or not.
In one word, there are many reasons that can help people to agree with the idea that being happy is more important that being prosperous. Some of them are mentioned above but the answer to the most important question is like a drop in a bucket. How calmness after failure can be obtained?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, really, second, so, well, whereas, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57198669171 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549199084668 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3723758693 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2142857143 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095813507592 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034159580497 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402533958794 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554403875822 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400874954076 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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