A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why?
Generally moving to a new place could be so much difficult for any person. So, it is important that you choose wisely when you decided to immigrate to another city or even country. When my friend suddenly told me that he is going to live in my hometown after next year, I was totally surprised since he always liked busy places more than anywhere like my quite city. He wanted me to describe good things of my town which can satisfy him to stay here.
First, if I wanted to tell one distinctive feature about my home town, it will definitely be its low population and quite environment. Our city has fewer people in comparison with its neighborhood cities. You can enjoy having a big country house with an even bigger yard. Also, you can grow up your own foods and vegetables in your personal garden. Our city suits more for people who seek to live somewhere in peace and without any struggle.
Secondly, my city is surrounded with vast green forests and blue cool valleys and canyons. Everyone who lived near our city can benefit from its clean air which has not experienced any pollution in its history hopefully. You would spend most of your leisure time with your family hiking its cold mountains and camping in its beautiful jungles. For example my cousin Ann who lived in one of the mega cities far from here, visited my city once and she completely changed her routine day life and moved her caravan into one of these forests and decided to live there ever since.
Last but not least, my city attracts variety of folks to bring their life here due to its prices and different goods costs. Most of the things needed for a normal life are being sold with a lower price in here than any other city or town near to us. It is mostly because of the border markets and weekend sold outs which happen regularly in my city. Moreover, since we have a long border with two foreign countries products are distributed easily with a logical price tag that attracts people to come and buy their whole season’s goods all from our city.
In summary, my city is a quiet and green place which temps any person who visited once to travel here again. It contains many beneficial factors all at once which makes it a nice spot for immigration for those people who enjoy natural environment and clean weather.
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- TOEFL T P O 23 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... natural environment and clean weather.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5686746988 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28635211846 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58313253012 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6007605516 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7894736842 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211588905403 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677762545765 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557500498813 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119253373495 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613999349607 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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