A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
A person from my college years is going to live in my town. I have been thinking about the different topics she will like and dislike. The quality of life is at a high level and you have what to do in your free time. Sometimes the city is overcrowded and pollution is increasing.
First, according to my comparison between varieties of cities, my town provides a good quality of life. If you work at low salary job you can still even maintain a good life. The shops offer inexpensive food and clothing. My friend can rent an accommodation at a reasonable price and find it very suitable. Hospitals here are very modern. People with numerous needs are treated in a very good way by the doctors. My fellow suffers from asthma so she will need some special help occasionally.
Second, because my town is a top city to live in you can see lots of people here. Sometimes it is stressful to wait 2 hours to get at your work. The many cars here pollute the air. But the local government has started a project to reduce the number of vehicles. In addition here are not so many parks and green places to visit. Outdoor activities are something you won’t be able to do so often. The village near my town is a mountainous destination. This can replace the lack of parks.
Third, in the evening you can do a lot of things: visit a museum, go to cinema, go to circus and even go to a football game. The variety of indoor activities is big. Most of the events are at a reasonable price. This allows you to go at least once a week and get away from the hard moments during the week.
To summarize, every town has its good or bad sides. It is a duty to all the people to make it better place. But in different situations it is up to the person to make his/her life better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y town provides a good quality of life. If you work at low salary job you can stil...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...e food and clothing. My friend can rent an accommodation at a reasonable price and find it very ...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ct to reduce the number of vehicles. In addition here are not so many parks and green pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, third, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31137724551 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48517422566 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6441090281 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.3846153846 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42307692308 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21531631631 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493601942402 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503863731225 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122916974368 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769094924983 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 11.7677419355 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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