If the government wants to invest in the following three areas, what do you think is the most worthwhile? land exploration, education, and healthcare.

Governments in every country, should pay attention to education, because its make the people aware of their surround of their environments. In my opinion, when the countries have the educated people they could solve all the problems in logical way.

First, when any government working to grow up the educated children, that children will make the future of that country, and also, they would break the traditional illogical behavior, addition, in this fast advancements of technology grow up all the children in the world should get progress at least to use smarts phone to know about marvelous way in front of them. For example, in China, some of the schools omitted the paper stuffs like as books and somethings like that so they use IPad to record the teachers voice and write down the important notes. And I think in near future it’ll come to all the schools in the world.

Second, if all people educated, they would help each other and also, the health could improve immediately. And when the people aware of everything they should have more respect for each other and thinking about protect landscapes and animals. For example, in Thailand, the citizenship's people hunting turtles, and the population of them going to distinct, but after some years when their children step on develop countries to study in abroad and get aware of everything they had come back to their countries to save the turtle life’s and forbidden to hunting them.

Third, when most of the people study on different fields, they should get aware about the earth problems and solve it, with going to land exploration. Like as in 2017, some scientists go to visit a big volcano to understand about, does it something alive in AA, and after lots of dangerous searching, they could understand, yes, it’s a single cell living there, and its fabulous result for all humans.

In conclusion, when people aware anything they could help others to improve their lives. And I wish these technologies get progress to help all the people in the world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n front of them. For example, in China, some of the schools omitted the paper stuffs like a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96793002915 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55105206144 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516034985423 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4544972463 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0436903875289 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209964112448 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300121483719 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0270765860691 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191795943316 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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