If the government wants to invest in the following three areas, what do you think is the most worthwhile? land exploration, education, and healthcare.
Investment is of great importance in the development of miscellaneous aspects of the materialistic world we live in. Land exploration, education, and healthcare are three main parts in which money talks. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among of experts about whether which one of those areas is more important in order to be explored. I definitely opt for healthcare and in the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two noticeable reasons and also what is discussed in this essay clarify which one is deserved the most.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that effective and efficient healthcare services can provide people a more convenient way to improve their health level as well as new equipment, various medics and so on. Furthermore, the result of this investment is not only a healthier society but also happier people who they are satisfied toward government. For example, five years ago in my city, the government decided to renew the health care centers and after that, the government acted in the promise it got a boatload of pleasant feedbacks from the people.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that with the investigation of government in order to construct the variety of new healthcare services the more job opportunities will be provided to the new students who they graduated in science and medical majors will be absorbed by those health centers. In clear language, the more investment the more job. For instance, the noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, which are revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country, show that a high percentage of graduate students who finished the university are unemployed because the equivalence between university outcomes and healthcare centers are not stable.
To put it briefly, if ones weigh the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that investment in healthcare area has notable consequences and also the people will be gladdened by the influence of the positive occurrence in their lives more than other areas which mentioned in the statement.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02900973409 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6502847386 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.090909091 100.406767564 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969762920515 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443943861495 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524853573857 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572837913086 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457685866542 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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