If one of your friend is visiting your country and he has just one day which place would you suggest him to go?
There is no doubt in that nowadays there is growing trend of visiting different Countries among individuals. If any foreigner would like to see my Country for a short span of time I would suggest that person to visit Lahore. I put emphasis on this city for two main reasons which I will explain the following paragraphs.
First of all, Lahore is the most ancient city in my Country and It has a plethora of historical places located adjacent to each other.
The most known places include fort of Lahore, the famous king mosque and tomb of Pakistan. Not only that even famous museum of science is also suited near to these historical places. So, if someone is visiting for just one day ,these are the best places to go so the visiting person can be enlighten with the history of lahore. I would like to explain my view point with my own experience. I remember few year ago, my friend from Algeria decided to come to visit my Country. He just spared one day from his busy schedule. Upon contacted with me, I told him to come to lahore. When he arrived, I showed him all the places mentioned-above with in one day. Since, all the places were not far from each other we just walked around to see all the famous places. He was amused and surprised that he visited all the places with in one day. He learned a lot about the culture and customs of Lahore by seeing all these places. Hence, this example proved my perspective.
On top of that, Lahore is known for the famous foods. It has a vast variety of food which someone can enjoy. It has a reputed food market known Anar-kali. This place is known for the variety of delicious food in the Country. It is understood if someone is visiting any country or place that person definitely like to taste the food of that place and learn about the different kind of food available in that Country. For Instance, my algerian friend was obsessed with our Country food. When he visited Lahore I took him to famous Anar-kali where he enjoyed different delicious foods.
In summation, from the above-mentioned discussion I can say that If any foriegner just have a one day to visit my Country I would suggest the foreigner to go to Lahore. This is because Lahore has all the famous places in a short distance to each other to learn the history of our Country. Not only that it also has the most delicious foods as well which Foreigner can enjoy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, well, for instance, kind of, no doubt, first of all, in my view, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50114942529 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42593552378 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432183908046 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9761637598 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3076923077 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7307692308 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11538461538 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310084152272 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877523828473 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878110862653 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166245490843 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758777996553 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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