Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer
There is no doubt that humans are never satisfy with their lives and always want to achieve more to fulfill their needs.
In my opinion, people most of the time are not gratify with whatever they have, Instead they want to attain more. I will explain my perspective with two main reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, people always compare their lives with others around them. When they see the success and accomplishments of others,they tend to underestimate themselves. They think whatever they have achieve is nothing in contrast to others. My own experience is a compelling example of this. when I was struggling with the Toefl exam, I used to compare my journey with my other friends who already passed the Toefl .whenever I failed in the exam, I started undermine myself. I never thought that my journey is different from their journey. Not considering that they passed the exam because they took off during the exam. In Contrast due to some family obligation I had to pursue my job. Although, it took long for me to pass the Toefl, but I never appreciate my hard work during the exam, because I was comparing my life to with their lives. Not knowing during the course of that journey I had make more money than them. So this example demonstrate my perspective that we always compare our lives with others that's why we never satisfy with our efforts.
Secondly, People most of the time underestimate all the blessings of the God on them and wants to achieve more. As it is the human nature when we need something we turn towards the God and praise the God. After achieving the desire thing we never turn back to the God. Instead, we think we accomplish the desire thing because of our efforts. Not knowing that we cannot achieve anything without the power of God. My own experience illustrate my point of view. When I was preparing for the Toefl, I started praying to the God. Once, I passed the exam, I forget God mercy on me and aiming for more desires without returning to the God. Due to that I was never satisfied with my life.
Hence this example prove my point that we do not appreciate God for all the blessing he gifted us.
In summation, from the above-mentioned discussion, I can say that it is true human always dissatisfy with their lives. This is because they compare their lives with other and also they do not appreciate all the blessings of the God on them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, no doubt, first of all, in contrast to, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6261682243 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51443122766 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434579439252 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9352287064 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1538461538 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96153846154 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254888294181 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787834868233 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701976344056 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154667012261 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843220211384 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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