What changes you would expect in 21st century
There is no doubt that 20th century ended with a lot of adventures inventions. As 21st century is on the verge to start with that a plethora of changes would be expected. I personally believe that there will be more advancement in the medical field and modes of transportations. In the subsequent paragraphs,I will elaborate my perspective with reasons and examples.
First of all, I am a firm believer that in the coming years progress in the medical field will rocket sky high. As in 20th century we have seen a vast improvements in the medical field which was much greater than the 19th century. For instance, in 19th century it was never thought that heart will be replaceable and people suffering from the heart diseases usually will be saved in 20th century. Luckily, with the beginning of 20th century due to enormous amount of medical technology medical doctors comes up with the idea of replacing a human heart. Certainly because with the modern medical machinery in 20th century doctors were able to replace heart. As a result, a large number of people suffering from the heart diseases recovered from the dangerous heart disease. Considering, this invention in mind we can say that 21st century will bring more surprises for us and it might be possibility that all humans organs can be replaced. Particularly this heart replacement invention force me to think that 21st century will be more advanced medically.
Additionally, the second important change with the start of 20th century would be in the transportation department. Undoubtedly, transportation system throughout the world has improved over the centuries. When we look back in previous centuries there are there are a lot of inventions happened in this field. Consider the example of bullet train in Japan at the end of 20th century. In 19th century, no one ever though about the bullet train. However, in 20th century, due to the improvement in this field engineers brought about this invention of bullet trains. This engineers in this field do not stop their work with the invention of bullet train. They also working on the project of undergound-water train in different areas of the world. One prime example of this project already under consideration between India, Pakistan and Dubai. Engineers are planning to deploy the rail track under water between these three countries. Some engineers believe that this project may practically possible in 20th century. Hence, this above consideration of invention of the under-water railway track leave me with the possibility of major technological improvement in this field.
In conclusion, from the above-mentioned, discussion I can assume two major changes in the 20th century. First one is in the field of the medical and secondly is in the transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03289473684 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82182140039 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453947368421 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 456.0 20.1344086022 2265% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2295.0 100.406767564 2286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 456.0 20.6045352989 2213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 145.0 5.45110844103 2660% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18135311624 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18135311624 0.076458572812 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132047560442 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452349014046 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 230.3 11.7677419355 1957% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -382.9 58.1214874552 -659% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 180.0 10.1575268817 1772% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.3 8.01818996416 365% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 10.002688172 580% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 184.4 10.0537634409 1834% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.247311828 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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