If you are required to give feedback about your classmates colleagues work or performance would you like to give positive comments or negative comments first

Recently, phenomenon of giving complement has sparked a heated debate. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that showering colleagues with compliments has always been one of the prominent topic in a contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to discern which would have better impact on the working performance a giving them positive comment first or negative comments. I concur with giving positive comments first as it has a plus point, than passing a negative comments. In what follows, I will elaborate my point.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons why I certainly believe that giving constructive comments is beneficial. It provides person with the brobdingnagian amount of optimism to do better in their respective field. Also, they would be more encouraged to work for the extra credit hour for the further excellence in job and polishing their skills. In a way, if a boss would appreciate his colleague for his project than he would be more keen towards doing better in the coming days because as we know words plays a pivotal role in the performance of work.
In addition to that, giving approbation of work does bring huge amount of ebullience in the certain individual. Work done with the enthusiasm is more productive and helps to improve the creativity of a person. For instance, if you appreciate a student for a good test score in front of whole class than that will keep him motivated throughout the year to keep with the scores. Hence, passing of good compliments tends to bring the happiness along with the patience and perseverance.
Nevertheless, sometimes there could be a different scenario where you are bound to give the negative feedback at first. According to my experience, as I am a Science Student if someone doesn't give me the harsh reality check of the consequences that would occur if I don't work accordingly then it might cause some major destructions. For instance, while working in a chemistry lab if I happen to teach my juniors about using Concentrated Hydrochloride with bare hands then it might burn their hands hence sometimes "Prevention is better than cure". Although, there might be some cases where giving negative feedback might enhance the work performance, I certainly believe giving constructive feedback is better lot of times.
To recapitulate, I accord with the giving positive feedback because it will help in the increment of the their confidence as well as help in polishing their creativity to next level.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07021791768 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96383863858 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52784503632 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3788891264 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325086398835 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096646896998 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868807541171 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163188574212 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776282046401 0.0645574589148 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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