Undoubtedly, a city which I have lived for 20 years is very beautiful. I would change the location of the factories if I wanted to change something in my city. Actually I would locate them out of the city. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
First and foremost, there are many factories which can pollute the weather and cause a lot of damage since they produce serious smocks and chemical materials which enter to the air and water. So drinking water is contaminated by these chemicals and this water can damage the health of people. The sunlight cannot reach to the earth since smokes go through the air and cover the sky and in this situation people may become sick since they breath dirty weather.Changing the location of factory create a situation in which people become healthier and happier.
Secondly, presence of factories in my city create many problems among which decreasing in parking lot number is one of them. Since there are many workers and stuff in factories and everyday they take a trip with their own cars in order to going to work. if the factories and companies laid in out of town the parking space would increase.
In conclusion, changing the location the factory is really important for
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7963800905 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55782213723 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552036199095 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9230912045 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3636363636 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850174966032 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042844538122 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552956412153 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717569272911 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478661429606 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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