If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
People learn from experience. The reason behind this fact is, experience is about the failure or success or the past memories or the mistakes done and the ways to correct them. Thus a famous entertainer or athlete should be such personality, who possesses an extraordinary experience throughout his career. Henceforth I would like to meet Mr. Milkha Singh, a former athlete from India. He was an Olympic level athlete whose specialised into 200 metre or 400 metre sprint running. I would like to meet him due to the reasons listed and explained below.
Firstly, he was an Army Defence Militant who ...
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