If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
If i could meeat a famous entertainer or athleter, that will be M.S.Dhoni former captain of Indian cricket team.
I am always passionate about cricketer from childhood. I admired M.S.Dhoni as a sportsman from childhood. I wanted to be a cricketer when growing old. M.S.Dhoni is former captain of Indian cricket team under whom India won 50 over world cup, t-20 world cup and many other series.
I will ask him how it feels to win a world cup for your country.
Furthermore, He is regarded as one of the best cricket captain of the world. He is known for hiting sixes and finishing matches. If i would meet him, i would like to get tips on cricket, how i can improve my game my batting and bowling. He is known as the best wicketkeeper in the India,
getting advice from him will be beneficial to my wicketkeeping skills.
M.S.Dhoni is known for remaining calm under pressure while playing.For example, in the final of world cup 2011, India lost three big wickets early in the chase of 270 runs, M.S.dhoni promoted himself to number three, and build the innings with Gautam Gambhir and eventually finished the match. I will ask him how to remain calm under tense situations in life. He stays humble and calm in failure and success. I will ask him how to remain humble in success and calm in failure.
Despite of busy schedule, M.S.Dhoni can be seen in various commercials and attending many events, i will ask him how he manages his time.
In cricket matches also he plans his ininings, he starts slowly mostly with a strike rate of 50 for first 20 balls but finishes the game well before limited overs with strile rate reaching over 100 certain time. I will ask him how he plans and builds his ininings, how he adapts to different situations. It will help me in improving my game. And i can use this tips in life elsewhere as well.
Additionally, he is one of the fittest cricketer in India. He is known for sprinting fast between wickets. He is over 30 years old but still can compete with any young athelete. I will definetely ask him his fitness schedule and diet.
So,i thing meeting M.S.Dhoni will be great for my cricket career as well as for my life. As i can take tips and life lessons from him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6225 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4999687498 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.4588548441 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.96 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.058881049807 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202750037422 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372390714777 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039707548818 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431653309924 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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