Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money to only one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why?
- An organization that provides food and housing to people in need
- An organization that gives people money to start their own small business
- An organization that provides medical care to people in need.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that charity plays a pivotal role in the life of poor people in any society. It is widely accepted that charity could be able to change life poor people with different activities. Some people may hold the view that provides food, house and medical care to people in need. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that gives money to start their own small business. I personally believe that gives money to start own small business is a good idea for help to poor people. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, a small business could creating a job for poor people and they could have a decent job. Therefore, they could enhance their skills and capabilities in order to prompts their job. If they have a job they could make money and buy a house and car as well healthy life. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I was in an elementary school, after occurring earthquake, I missed my father and destroyed my house. My family had the bad experience because we have not anything. My mother with a money that loan from one of the charities in my city, she stared their work that she was talent in them. She makes pottery and blow with clay and sell them in the workshops and galleries. After ten years my mother with effort and hardworking could establish her gallery and hire three people that they were poor people. Small business not only creates job but also change a life. This example demonstrates how the creating small business enhance lifestyle poor people that need money for starts own small business.
In addition, casting a quick glance at the small business, one can realize that develop economically is one of the best results we have witnessed. The different small business boosts different products. The more a product, the more sell. As a result, flourish enhance economically. As the recent studies in my country show, a host of small business that makes traditional and handcraft goods make opportunity for a country that exports these goods and contribute to improving my country economic on the small scale. As a result, this way of produce local and traditional product help country having active economic.
All in all, I firmly believe that an organization that gives money to start their own small business is the best choice for help to poor people. It is hard to disguise that the fact that provides house, food and medical care are also two vital issue that should not be ignored, but gives money to start own small business could be a lot more important for too many reasons two of which I mentioned above. Therefore, I believe that the benefits of earning this quality out weight the other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
... To begin with, a small business could creating a job for poor people and they could ha...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my country economic on the small scale. As a result, this way of produce local and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, i feel, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68659793814 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44296922391 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465979381443 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8108803519 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4230769231 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6538461538 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73076923077 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190225182522 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543238739009 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506842703915 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129064044584 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722522377843 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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