Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major
company to build a large factory near your neighborhood. Do you think this
is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific
reasons and examples
The presence of factories near residential zones is a very controversial
topic in modern society. personally, I would wholeheartedly support the
construction of a factory near my town. I feel this way for two reasons, which I
will explore in the following essay.
First of all, my community desperately needs the jobs that a factory
would provide. I live in an economically disadvantaged region which has
suffered from high unemployment rates for more than fifty years. This has had
some very serious effects on the town, including high rates of child poverty
and crime, as well as poorly developed public services. This makes me think of
my brother’s situation. He lives in the same country as I do, but in a different
city. Several years ago, a manufacturing plant actually was constructed in his
region. There was, indeed, an increase in pollution, noise and traffic after the
factory opened, but everyone agrees that this was an acceptable trade-off for the
declines in crime, graffiti and homelessness that occurred at the same time. I
believe that my brother’s example demonstrates why it would be a great idea to
construct new industry in my town.
Secondly, modern industry is not as bad as a lot of people think. Here
in Canada, factories come equipped with modern technology that removes the
most dangerous chemicals from their regular emissions. Moreover, advances in
public transportation can alleviate some of the traffic-related concerns that most
people have when they think about industrial development. For example, when
that factory was constructed in my brother’s town he and many of his neighbors
were quite surprised at how little air pollution they noticed. There was some
effect on their air quality, but it was not nearly as bad as they thought it would
be. Not only that, but the construction of the factory caused the local government
to invest heavily in public transportation for the workers, and this has made life
more convenient for everyone in the city. This example describes another
reason why I would love for a factory to be constructed in my hometown.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a factory would be a wonderful
addition to my community. This is because it would create a lot of employment,
and because factories are not as dirty and inconvenient as many people think.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16580310881 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00170873152 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531088082902 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5008333259 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.53405017921 684% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147154147657 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486121930714 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039311005941 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0384877749295 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396187215339 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.