To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
In this modern technological life, education has always been the cornerstone of society and it plays an important role in the academic environment. The controversial question which arises here whether universities should enhance the salaries of professors and pay much more attention to their revenue or not. As far as I concerned, this approach can be beneficial in numerous ways. In what follows, two elaborate reasons will indicate my standpoints.
First of all, it is incontrovertibly axiomatic that money concerns are a major hotbed of stress in the modern world and it has had a profound effect on everyone’s life. As a result, most professors and instructors have been concerned about their incomes and how to handle this issue. for instance, when professors are not able to earn enough money, they are forced to hold at least two jobs and as a result not only they cannot concentrate on their teaching, but also they can hardly do their research. Consequently, money is a leading determinant in the quality of education and to prevent mention phenomena, it is highly recommended to create a good situation for professors to do their duties effectively.
Secondly, another tenable reason which should not go unnoticed is that if university offers the high salaries for its professors, it will encourage the other knowledgeable professors to teach in this sort of universities too and it definitely provides adequate incentive for them to do their responsibilities perfectly and compete with each other for this career prospect in the competitive academic environment. So there is no shadow of a doubt that the professor will try their best to improve their abilities and skills to be chosen. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About five years ago, when I was a university student, my university did not use to pay the salaries of professors on time and after while we understood that due to this reason the professors had no choice to resign. So they had to increase the salaries of professors and asked them to change their minds. And now, this decision has been caused that my university modifies to one of the well-known universities in the county.
All in all, in today’s world, universities should care about the importance of education and they should do whatever to enhance the quality of education such as increasing the salaries of professors. So we can see not only teaching will be the only career of them, but also they will be encouraged to promote their knowledge in their field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for instance, sort of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03800475059 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04984793642 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517814726841 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.723409958 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5625 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3125 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249507585027 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752549014288 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834420375597 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145379430827 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600714367972 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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