Independent writing (question 2)Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your cho

Time is the most precious asset of our life, which should be spent wisely and efficiently. This brings up the question, within the 24 hour clock, when you can best utilize your time. There are many among us who prefer to work at late hours due to its quietness and many other reasons. But my preference for work hours is the very early morning and follow the sun throughout the day.

Firstly we cannot alter our biological clock, which determines the hormone flows and body temperature controlling our sleep pattern. Sleeping is the most neglected important activity when our brain heals the body and reorganizes memory. And active brain is mandatory for complex works at office. And to get a good sleep and active brain you have to sleep in time aligned with the body clock, which naturally dictates to go to bed before midnight and get up early in the morning. I do follow this rule for my daily activities. I start my day with a short exercise session followed by a rich breakfast before office. In the early office hours I avoid meetings to concentrate in complex problems at hand. After lunch I normally attend the scheduled meetings and other promotional activities. I believe all of my workloads have been managed properly for the early start in the morning.

Secondly, nobody works alone today. This means everybody has their own schedule and you have to manage with them. So keeping a common business hour is highly important for today's complex and cooperative workloads. In my office, as my experience says, most of the people starts their office early in the morning, so it is far more easier to catch the morning hours and work together. This way employees get more time together to make a great team bonding, which is necessary in the corporate culture today. For example one of colleague was a night crawler who used to be late at office almost every day and worked for late hours. As a result, with time, he detached from the team. On our official gatherings he used to sit alone and pass time with his phone. This affected his projects as well he was assigned to small projects which can be handled single handedly. Moreover, as a service oriented company having 24/7 support made him easy pick for any system unavailability problem at midnights. Soon he became unable to give time to his family and kids, which obviously is not good for his personal life as well.

In conclusion, I do prefer starting your work in the early morning. I feel like this since the mother nature has created us in this way and considering the overall schedule of my office and coworkers.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for complex works at office. And to get a good sleep and active brain you have t...
^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...fice early in the morning, so it is far more easier to catch the morning hours and work tog...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229838709677 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.151209677419 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0967741935484 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0645161290323 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0826612903226 0.0685040099705 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100806451613 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0282258064516 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48179538855 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302419354839 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.00403225806452 0.00188951952338 213% => OK
Determiners: 0.0826612903226 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00806451612903 0.0209618222197 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0201612903226 0.0139019557991 145% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2590.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 454.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70484581498 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31718061674 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222466960352 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160792951542 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0903083700441 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48179538855 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 63.2922124557 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4615384615 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9847903676 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 39.7082344968 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.2027027027 1.45489161554 83% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48851726564 0.300154397459 163% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0683618848474 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0613996630429 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.399531551214 0.497263757937 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149277384573 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143590493319 0.114077575197 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101978466125 0.0781384742642 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.363506779181 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0818965168346 0.067059652881 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34963189018 0.210909579961 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436607104978 0.0618886996521 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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