AN INSPIRATIONAL ENCOUNTER
It was the morning of 26 February that my mother came to wake me up making a drastic sound by pulling the window open. I in a very disoriented and disturbed demeanor hurried out of my bed to get dressed.
Reaching there got informed that I was at the wrong address and the right destination was at walking distance from my own residence.
Changed my route with a surprised and delighted air and finally reached the precise location. It consisted of a enormous black gate crossing which were present a group of colossal office buildings.
After a while, I was invited to meet the DC along with a group of 5 other of my colleagues.
As soon as I entered that colossal office I got overwhelmed with the ambiance and interior of that elegant office. The walls were painted in a very cool sky blue color which created a very refreshing atmosphere .The furniture gave a very antique Victorian touch to the interior. The chairs were arranged with walls and with the front wall was placed the table of the respective bureaucrat.
I was astounded in a very delighted way to see that he was a gentleman nearly late twenties holding such a prestigious and senior post. Moreover, the moment he started the conversation his speech was so articulate that everyone present seemed highly attentive and enthralled, including me. This gentleman seemed to have such a calm and cool demeanor yet with an impression of a lot of etiquette and wisdom. His perception and astuteness were evident from his diction.
He gave an air of mental keenness and a much groomed personality with refined decorum. He seemed like a man of so much influence.
After his pleasant conversation with a touch of humor in it, it was time for us to move out.
We all thanked him and returned to our abodes. On the way back, I knew I was carrying an unforgettable impression of that graceful gentleman. I knew that my perspective has changed about so many things in life. I could feel the impact of his priceless words and formidable persona. His charismatic aura had left irremovable marks on my mind. I could feel the burst of inspiration and motivation in the self which was dull and depressed initially.
I am truly blown away after this fabulous encounter that I’ll never like to forget. The surge of this new energy and burst of so much passion was very unique .The entire experience was so special that I’d like to keep reminding myself of it over and over again.
Hence, I can blissfully conclude by saying that I had a wonderful and remarkable encounter with an inspirational intellectual personality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the window open. I in a very disoriented and disturbed demeanor hurried out of my...
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...d the precise location. It consisted of a enormous black gate crossing which were...
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...ich created a very refreshing atmosphere .The furniture gave a very antique Victor...
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...ntique Victorian touch to the interior. The chairs were arranged with walls and wit...
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...energy and burst of so much passion was very unique .The entire experience was so special t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75555555556 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80796398275 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.798298809 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.56 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115816632103 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329272146224 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747061470718 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533150151522 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980980776132 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.