Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The university should be an ideal place where a student can learn and groom his personality into a more civilized and polished human being. It should aim to produce a human being sensitive to all the rights and wrongs of the society. The acme of its endeavors should be to produce human beings aiming excellence and not mere followers of mediocrity. The graduated individual should have a trained intelligence, aptly valued and sought after by the society.
Furthermore, to improve the quality of process of education a university must be led by fine class of faculty. The faculty which is truly and earnestly devoted to its calling. The teachers and professors should be utterly conscious of the impact and nature of their job. They must take their job as a major responsibility in order to produce the students who will have the passion to learn and genuine desire to research.
Henceforth, such a goal of superior teaching environment can only be created if the teachers are motivated enough to share their knowledge. The professors can be inspired and encouraged to achieve the pinnacle of their potentialities , if the universities are also coping up with their necessities. The universities should absolutely, cater all the demands of the professors and the most significant energy boost could be a lucrative salary package.
As a matter of fact, teaching fraternity nowadays is not sufficiently accommodated. Resultantly, their level of devotion, motivation and fire to shape the minds of the pupil rightly, is extinguishing. This has gravely impacted the standard of the universities and resultantly, the standard of society. The most prestigious universities of the world e.g. all the Ivy League univiersities - Newyork, Yale, California, Boston, are the ones where the professors are given an elite status and their salaries along with other demands are rightly catered. The main reason of such universities to have a standard of excellence is their fine and efficient system of management.
In a summation, in this time of need and booming expenses any citizen must be given a contending and sufficient salary to live a decent life. Keeping the importance and significance of the profession of teachers, the fraternity should be given not only the highest salary but also should be included in the elite class of the society. As they are the backbone of society and the main shaper of morality of a community. The value of their profession can never be ignored. Conclusively, i would go in strong agreement of the presented statement that universities should definitely spend more money on salaries of the university professors
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., furthermore, hence, if, so, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17482517483 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06065111218 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505827505828 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6707429161 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04761904762 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172203342941 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533224570537 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605914931235 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100368050495 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279874326699 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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