YOU ARE PLANNING TO STUDY ABROAD. WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU WILL LIKE OR DISLIKE ABROAD? GIVE SPECIFIC REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR VIEW.
Studying abroad is a dream of majority of the students in most of the regions. Most of the students are filled with this burning desire to explore and discover the world and unravel its mysteries, studying abroad is a great opportunity to enjoy all that and so much more.
There are so many fascinating and inspiring things that boost me up to take up this goal.
The things that will encourage me the most, to pursue my goal is that I would get a great chance to satisfy my urge of discovering another continent, it will give me massive exposure to the outside world. I will get a chance to meet and interact with all the different kinds of people from different cultures. The idea of interacting with different races and learning different languages is absolutely mind-blowing. I am thrilled by the notion of personal growth and learning that I would achieve through this journey. I would have a chance to go through a process of transformation and develop a deep insight about humanity, which will broaden my horizons.
The idea of trying different kinds of delicacies and food cuisines excite me. I would get a valuable platform to make friends on an international level. The notion of having a diverse social circle always pumps my morale high to work hard to get established in abroad as, I am a kind of person who is inspired by people and a great believer of social importance.
There will be a totally different environment, with so many new facilities. So many fascinating adventures waiting to be experienced, I will go site seeing, touring. Overall, I am profusely motivated and passionate about my whole journey which is going to shape and polish me on so many levels. I will be more independent, living on my own terms and supporting myself very nicely.
Most importantly, I will get a huge opportunity to sharpen my skills in my field. Learn from great minds, share ideas and prosper in my field. I will get a chance to be a very successful professional. Research and exposure will be diversified. I will be able to serve humanity in a better way and on a much larger scale.
The main drawback would be the long distance from my immediate family. I would feel nostalgic initially. Also, there will be adjustment sickness initially. There will be loneliness before, I would find the right kind of friends. But I guess, all these drawbacks will be eventually catered and cared for. Overall, it is going to be a very satisfying and successful decision which will change my life in a tremendous way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a tremendous way" with adverb for "tremendous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sful decision which will change my life in a tremendous way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i guess, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74772727273 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84268580805 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486363636364 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1390520909 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3461538462 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.34615384615 5.45110844103 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834014697448 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277687009606 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276144118256 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445613902154 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029001438443 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.