DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH STATEMENT THAT SUCCESSFUL PEOPLE ALWAYS KEEP ON DOING NEW THINGS AND TAKE UP NEW CHALLENGES RATHER THAN DOING WHAT THEY ALREADY NO WELL.
I very much agree with the idea that successful people try new things and take risks rather than repeating what they are already applying to their daily routines.
Success is basically the state of mind,state of life, the standard of living which is achieved as a result of hard work and continuous enhancement in all fields of life.A successful person has enhanced social circle, bank balance,work position or any other field in which a person is trying to excel.
Successful people cannot achieve that level of excellence and refinement without going through a series of challenges and new tasks and practicing new activities.Its only the result of challenging ones own abilities that a person can jump out of their comfort zone and can cross that line between average and above average.Challenges in life are the biggest triggers to ones mental system which can boost a persons total abilities to cross and win a particular difficulty level.
Challenges and risks only activate a persons entire conscious level but also compel him to do more than he is been doing and squeeze out every drop of talent and abilities which his mind possesses.In the process of clearing that hurdle a persons mind is groomed and polished to learn and understand important skills which bless him with excellence and success.
In other words challenging ones abilities is most crucial criteria to step ahead of ones competitors and contemporaries.This is the most evident difference in life s of people who are rendered unsuccessful and lagging behind.Risks and challenges have their own cons and pros,but if the pros are weighing out cons then definitely such a risk must be taken to prosper in
specific as well as all fields of life.
Hence i agree with the given argument.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...c as well as all fields of life. Hence i agree with the given argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03412969283 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89278090108 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58361774744 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.65785052 48.9658058833 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.833333333 100.406767564 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8333333333 20.6045352989 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 5.45110844103 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223218312432 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120389049878 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09807517541 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107757067586 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958578567331 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 11.7677419355 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 58.1214874552 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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