Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The choice of a profession is indubitably the most important step in a child's profession. Without appropriate line of career a person can invariably lose his progress. So i would basically consider the idea of choosing one's profession according to one's personal interest and inclination. The concept of picking your own life journey is pretty interesting and suitable for me for some of the reasons.
Firstly, when a child grows up he should be allowed full freedom and respect for his decisions should be given. Otherwise, the character strength and personality of a child can be adversely affected. This could become a cause of many other moral and social issues in future. Occupational success is based solely on the devotion and passion towards the field. On the contrary, if parents are pressurizing kids to choose a job line of their like, their lives could become monotonous and miserable.Depression will become the way of life of a pressurized and dragged person. There will be no joy or bliss in what he does. Idea of hope and excitement could become a mere dream.
Therefore, in order for an individual to excel in the occupation, there must be allowed the element of autonomy and free will. Only, this is the right way towards a professional life full of thrill and exhilaration. There will be no boredom but solely zest and zeal to pursue further and rise above all contemporaries. For-instance, great names like Galileo, Newton, Picasso, Da vinci, Beethoven, are of those people who had craze and fire in them to explore and experiment more and more in their respective fields. These were people who were earnestly devoted towards their calling. Hence, they not only achieved great heights but also served humanities after they even were no more, They left the irremovable and profound marks on the pages of history, Respect and Honor is what they are thanked with till today.
Conclusively, I would like to sum up my discussion with the final words that
it is certainly the best for the younger lot to have a say and full freedom to not only choose but also progress in their future career lines. So i would strongly disagree with the above presented statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92162162162 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83082918314 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3964498598 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8421052632 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125948902348 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300980027749 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04734789448 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657714374919 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394309014895 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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