For hundreds of years, there has been a serious debate among people about that fascinating question. When it comes to the issue of the selection of childrens' jobs, some people believe that children should choose some jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs while some others disagree and claim that it is not a good way for children to opt a job which is not different from their parents' jobs. As far as I am concerned, I think the first idea carries more weight due to some reasons which I will explain.
Above all, parents often have spent a long time on their jobs which means their jobs are reliable and it will be able a good source of achieving money. In other words, parents often tried a bunch of jobs to find the best one correspond to their circumstances. Hence, children can rely on those jobs. For instance, my father worked in three different factories when he was young. Eventually he figured out that non-of them was appropriate due to our citys' situations and those factories were closed at that time. As a result, he established his small factory. He has worked in this field for about forty years. So, it is a reliable work which can keep going for the next generations.
The second reason why I feel that way is about the experience that our parents have in their jobs. To be more exact, they can help us to develop our jobs faster since they have a considerable amount of experience in a specific field. Take my father, for example, he has wide various of experience in building the agricultural devices which can be very effective for me if I start to work in this field. Therefore, parents' experience is a so precious source of knowledge of a specific job that children can use it without any trouble.
The last reason which deserves some words here is about the infrastructures which are provided by our parents. With these infrastructures we can improve our jobs easier and can make a big profit as soon as possible. My friend is a compelling example of that. He uses the machines which his father imported tree years ago from China. Nowadays he is a famous person in our city and even in our country because of making much money in a short period of time.
In conclusion, given the facts that parents' jobs are reliable, they have a considerable amount of experience in in their jobs and there are infrastructures which are provided by our parents and we can use them, I think it will be better if children opt a job which is similar to their parents’ one.
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Suggestion: in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54788418708 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58651811169 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483296213808 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2194671015 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2380952381 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.380952381 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404635957321 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105483939062 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14367689584 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262014109287 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136124347305 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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