Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Everyone’s life always revolves around money. In another word money is survival. Developed economy has made our life much better than past. Everyone should contain at least that much amount of money from which they can buy their basic needs. No matter how much money you earn, one should always be mindful while spending it. I strongly believe that saving is always beneficial considering unexpected future. I will explain my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, life is a roller coaster ride. we never know when life throw a curve ball towards us. At such difficult time saving comes in to action. People who are wealthy might not get affected that much by emergency crisis but people who earn small amount may find it difficult to come out of financial crisis. Recently, I was reading an article about how people gets bankrupt in the USA and surprisingly the top most reason to go bankrupt was medical expenses. That article reminded me a friend who got bankrupt because he had an accident. He was in a coma for a long time before his recovery. That accident cost him a lot and he spent every worth of penny to pay the hospital bills. Today he is bankrupt.
Secondly, instead of spending money on the enjoyment people should invest their money for the future. People can invest their money in properties or stock. Through these types of investments, they can earn money on top of their salary. Additionally, by saving the money can save person as well as his family. I believe education is also a very good investment. If a person has a better education, he/she can earn more by doing a white-collar job. For example, when I came to the USA I had only bachelor’s degree, but I decided to pursue my master’s degree here and after earning that I can earn way more.
Let’s put in a nut shell, Money brings security, it is better to not squander in the enjoyment. Saving money is beneficial for future emergency and save ourselves from critical situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79069767442 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65370517631 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595930232558 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1099124224 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.92 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.76 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236127972407 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632505415968 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508375033967 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154236241197 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627718096935 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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