Is it better to live in the countryside or in the city
As people grow up, they will finally encounter with an important question regarding where to live. Some of them will choose to live in the city, while others may choose to live in the countryside. Although there are some advantagous of living in the countryside, I personally opt for living in the city. I feel this way for two main reasons which I am going to elaborate on in the following.
First and foremost, people in the cities have access to variety of facilities. There are a lot of facilities in the cities such as hospitals, museums, universities, and etc,… which people in the cities can have a prompt access when they need to. Moreover, transportation systems in the cities have decreased the amount of time which take for people to go to these locations. My personal experince is a compelling example of this. Last year I had broken my hand as a result of a car accident, then I noticed that there is a hospital in the nearby street and I decided to go there. It took me only ten minutes to go there. However, If I was in the countryside, It may have taken several hours for me to arrive in a hospital.
Secondly, There are more job oppurtinities in cities rather than In the countryside. People from both cities and the country attend universitis and become skilled in various professions. However, since there is not enough job oppurtunities in the countryside, when they graduate, most of them have to live in the cities to find their favorite job. For example, I had a classmate in the university who was from countryside. Our major was clinical psychology which is a sought-after field in the big cities. After we graduated from the university, my friend backed to his home in the countryside and started to seeking for a job in the filed of psychology, however, he couldn’t find any which coused him to back again to the city. When he returned, my friend could find his loved job within a few weeks.
To sum up, with all this taken into account, I do belive that cities are better place to live on the ground that there are a score of facillities there which people can have access to them with ease and there are satisfactory job oppurtunities as well. Who can ignore these advantagoues and live in the country?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, i feel, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81458700345 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4975 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0986136606 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254557082868 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664652101629 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618309014482 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147777982132 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403969649089 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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