Is it better to live in the countryside or in the city?
As people grow up, they will finally encounter an essential question regarding where to live. Some of them will choose to live in the city, while others may choose to live in the countryside. Although there are some advantages to living in the countryside, I personally opt for living in the city. I feel this way for two main reasons which I am going to elaborate on in the following.
First and foremost, people in the cities have access to a variety of facilities. There are many facilities in the cities such as hospitals, museums, universities, etc,… which people in the cities can have a prompt access when they need to. Moreover, transportation systems in the cities have decreased the amount of time which take for people to go to these locations. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last year I had broken my hand as a result of a car accident, then I noticed that there is a hospital in the nearby street and I decided to go there. It took me only ten minutes to go there. However, If I was in the countryside, It may have taken several hours for me to arrive in a hospital.
Secondly, There are more job opportunities in cities rather than In the countryside. People from both cities and the country attend universities and become skilled in various professions. However, since there are not enough job opportunities in the countryside, when they graduate, most of them have to live in the cities to find their favorite job. For example, I had a classmate in the university who was from the countryside. Our major was clinical psychology, which is a sought-after field in the big cities. After we graduated from the university, my friend backed to his home in the countryside and started to seek for a job in the field of psychology. However, he could not find any which caused him to back to the city. When he backed, my friend could find his loved job within a few weeks.
To sum up, with all this taken into account, I do believe that cities are better places to live on the ground that there is a score of facilities there which people can have access to them with ease and satisfactory job opportunities as well. Who can ignore these advantages and live in the country?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, i feel, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59595959596 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78032367262 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487373737374 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5286409072 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253557344508 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642754570038 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619218432929 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147518308345 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408529159295 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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