It is better to make friends who are intelligent than with a good sense of humor
Friends are indispensable part of our lives, because there are situations in which we may rely on them either to help us or to give us a valuable advice. I absolutely agree with the following statement that it is definitely better to have pals who are intelligent than with a good sense of humor and I will provide some supportive explanaitons in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, an intelligence or acumen are considerable qualities of a person which can espouse him to take wise actions when he is in a plight. Accordingly, a person will be able to solve an arduous issue rapidly and be satisfied with his ations or to aid his friends with savvy suggestions. My best friend is a compelling example of intelligent person. I remember when we were in the high school, I had a probem in choosing a specific topic for a project in our geography class. Then, when I asked him what topic would be suitable to be for a presentation, he declared that I should visit my mother's workplace and ask for historical books and journals which I could use as a resources. Consequently, I could do my presentation readily sans necessity of digging on internet for information. As my mom works at a local museum where the first Bulgarian capital was established I could use anything as an essential information for my assignment. If my friend had not given me the clue to go there and use a museum's book, I would have not come up with the idea that I could use my mom's workplace.
In addition, if we are surrounded by intelligent friends rather than friends with good sense of humor, we can learn a new information or fundamental facts in multitudinous areas. Thus, we can remember facts and academic information which we can utilize in further moments. For instance, when I met a great friend last year on a river cruise, I learned some interesting facts abour international languages, more specifically the language of dwellers in Curacao Island, dubbed "Papiamento". Ever since then, that information bacame unforgettable to me and I store it in my memories. Hence, I can use it to stand out when I meet a group of new friends or other people in the future and to make a good impression.
To sum up, it is better when we have intelligent friends around us, because jokes can not help us when we really need support. We can rely on our friends for wise suggestions when we are in predicament. Also, we can use our intelligent friends to learn something new, which we are interested in and use it as a powerful tool in later stage of our live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'valuable advice'.
Suggestion: valuable advice
...on them either to help us or to give us a valuable advice. I absolutely agree with the following ...
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Line 2, column 678, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a resource' or simply 'resources'?
Suggestion: a resource; resources
...books and journals which I could use as a resources. Consequently, I could do my presentati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, hence, if, may, really, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62693156733 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0749989298 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507726269316 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2226658455 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268553097147 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880559915199 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11550415116 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187035436563 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100250537295 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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