People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice
Music is inextricable part of everyone's live, regardless of the style or duration. According to me, music is essential for number of reasons and I will explain why in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, numerous people listen music as a way to escape the stressful daily routine and distract themselves. Consequently, individuals feel relaxed and engrossed in equanimity when listen to their favorite songs. No one can deny that it s scientifically proved how music has positive impact on a person's mood and emotions, therefore music is truly best way to tackle with the pressure at work or other painstaking obligations. For example, every time when I am busy with some university assignments or projects I have extremely arduous situations and obstacles. However, by the time when I take my 30 min breaks I play my favorite style of music with cup of hot coffee in order to relax. After every break, I realized that deep house music has made me more productive and efficient and that I can deduce form results at the end. If I don't listen deep house music during my break, I would not probably attain the desire results.
In addition, music is a good way to revive memories and situations. There is no shortage of opinion that each of us has experienced great times with some essential for him people like family members or significant other. Some songs might help to consort these sentimental moments with them in terms of melody or lyric. Accordingly, a person would experience various feelings and certain songs would truly touch his heart. For example, there is one song which lyric is absolutely striking and every time when I hear it, my eyes become full of tears. The reason is that when I go to work on a cruise ship, I absence form home 9 months and that particular song is about home, family and adolescence as it provide profuse feeling of sadness and nostalgia. Therefore, the song is meaningful and imperative to me and I love to listen to it.
In a nutshell, I believe that listening to variety of different music anytime has copious benefits to each individual. Some of the advantages are to overcome the daily stress as it may help you to be more productive. Also, it brings about valuable memories which might have strong impact on person's emotions. They often elicit beautiful or lugubrious moments in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'truly the best'.
Suggestion: truly the best
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...an deduce form results at the end. If I dont listen deep house music during my break...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79702970297 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74350343483 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566831683168 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0047365469 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234222041902 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063635778509 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554607273962 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13798437446 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467872670116 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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