You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.
People often face a difficulty pertaining to the necessity of commuting or trips to certain places. In fact, nowadays that issue has been solved with the help of well-conceived public transportation, such as buses, subways and so on and the advent of copious vehicles. Preferably, I travel to my work place or other venues by using publish transportation for numerous reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, when travel by bus or subway I stave off the unpleasant dilema where to park my vehicle. Consequently, I won't waste valuable time, especially when I am on a hurry and I will avoid exhaustion and headache. No one can deny that every driver needs to arrive at a particular place considerable time in advance, owing to the fact that the time would be need it to find an aptly place for the car. Also, people might search for nearby parking lot and that in turn would cost time. For example, when I was at a sophomore many of my colleagues were coming to the university building with cars, however I adhered to public transportation. Almost every day, each of them had to go at least 2 hours earlier from their apartments to the university in order to catch a free place for his car. Therefore, it is thought that my peers had woken up extremely early to dispose with sufficient time for arrival without being late. In contrast, I didn't need to wake up so early becuase buses to the university building were passing in every 15 minutes and I had time in abundance.
What's more is that, by using public transportation, we are inclined to establish friendships with many strangers. Accordingly, we broader our social contacts and in a great degree we can run into some people that might help us in later stage of our lives. There is no shortage of opinion that, multitudinous people from different walks of live use public transportation and chances to make a chitchat are noteworthy. I once remember when I had to go back home for Christmas and traveled by train. As a matter of fact, the saloon where I was sitting was full with 3 more students from different universities. We swiftly started to talk to each other and each of them was friendly and interesting person. After a while, I realized that the father of one of them posseses with a company for building materials. Since, my parents were about to start small renovation of our bathroom, they were suffering from the need of technician. I took the number from the yound lady I met and fortunately we found extremely skilled technic who has made our bath in the way my parents had imagined.
In conclusion, I believe that there are more avails of travelling by public transportation than by cars. It is because we don't have to go earlier in order to find a parking place or spot for our vehicle. Also, by using public transportation we can create friendships and retain them for the future, because they might be imperative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('aptly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('place') instead of another adjective.
... that the time would be need it to find an aptly place for the car. Also, people might search ...
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...ival without being late. In contrast, I didnt need to wake up so early becuase buses ...
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... minutes and I had time in abundance. Whats more is that, by using public transport...
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...ortation than by cars. It is because we dont have to go earlier in order to find a p...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67766990291 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84913727014 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516504854369 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7179755067 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.739130435 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69565217391 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139503796854 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428316737776 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416524041239 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093293263115 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00705059363946 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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