It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Marriage life means that you will spend the rest of your life with that someone, and personally I feel it's better to marry someone who shares a lot of common things to you. I feel this way for some reasons.
To begin with, marrying someone who shows a reflection to your life means you will have easier time to resolve any conflict that is present in your marriage life. Because conflict is inevitable in marriage life. My personal experience is a compelling evidence of this. About three years ago me and my wife had a terrible fight because my wife was jealous because she saw me with another woman who was a travel agent, I need to meet that woman because I need to plan a trip to Caribbean Island with my wife. She was so jealous and threaten split up. But me and my wife are so similar to each other we didn't have a courage to leave one another behind. As a result we reconcile with each other and make sure that it was all only a misunderstanding. Now we a promised not to always jump into conclusion and always checking the fact first. This wouldn't happen if my wife and I are a person with different personality, it will take a long time to resolve any conflict and even can lead to a divorce that will have a devastating impact to us
Additionally, having someone with a lot in common will make your life more enjoyable! Because with how similar you are to your wife chances are you both enjoy the same thing and it's easier to plan anything together. For example, if you and your wife are into skiing you will have easier time to plan what to do during holiday, which you both will go skiing. Once you arrived on the mountain you will both are going to have a wonderful time together because you enjoy the same thing. This is harder to do if you're enjoying different thing.
In conclusion, marrying someone who reflects with one another will benefit you and your partner in the long run ensuring a healthy and happy marriage life, keeping you both together in life as what the oath said "Until death do us apart".
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the same thing. This is harder to do if youre enjoying different thing. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46276595745 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41898495861 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470744680851 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.377731041 48.9658058833 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194527559032 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712441760894 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767776212444 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152144499064 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042537567432 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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