Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing or medicine. What is the one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
Coming from Indonesia we have many different varieties of plants, some provide food, shelter, and medicine. But the most important of them all is Rice because it supplies our people with food and economy importance, and keeping the balance of the country.
Rice in Indonesia is a staple food and it comes from rice plant, there’s a saying that “You haven’t eat if you haven’t eat rice” because rice is so important to supply energy to Indonesian people to do their job and their daily activities. Not only to human, rice also provides food for farm animals, chicken and poultry will consume the rice grain and for cattle they will consume the excess plant that has been separated from the grain.
Not only for food rice is also a market commodity. For a country that makes rice as their staple food there will be a market for buying and selling rice. Rice is a huge commodity especially in rural areas, farmers would plant rice on their rice fields in large quantities and when it’s time to harvest it they would separate the grain from the plant. Once they collect enough grain to sell they will sell it to the market and it would generate income for them and for the area from tax. Not only to rural area rice is also a national commodity for export to another country and generates income for the country economy.
Rice also plays an important part of keeping the country stability because if there’s not enough food there will be an uprising and demonstration that could potentially tear down the nation and ruin the economy. Making sure there’s enough rice for everyone is important for my country stability and economy.
To summarize, rice in Indonesia is important because it’s a staple food for the people and food for farm animals aswell, rice is a market commodity for the rural areas and the country itself, and keeping the country stability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Coming from Indonesia we have many different varieties of plants, some provide food,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91384615385 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51009794948 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5459968009 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.083333333 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128334627364 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645903772627 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300195303998 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962864670337 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269538672058 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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