It is better save money for the future. Do you agree or disagree tha statement
As we grow up we realize that money is very important in our live. People can buy many things with it. Also, we use it to pay our daily expenses. We have to work really hard to earn it. Also, we spend it fast. In my opinion, I believe that we always have to save money for some time in the future. I think this ways for many reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, while we are younger we have to think in the future. Since that moment we should start saving money. As we get older, we become less active and our workforce decrease. For instance, my dad, he worked hard during his youth. He saved money in a bank account for his old age. Now he is retired and he has his own savings to pay everything he wants.
Second, is beneficial save money for the future. Many persons save money to buy a house. Others because they want to marry and have a family. For example, my friend Loren, is working overtime in her job. She is doing extra time because she wants to save money for her wedding. Last year she used to work fifty hours a week. She saved all that money in her bank account to spend it in her wedding. I admire her because she keeps every penny she earns for the coming event.
Finally, for all that I mention above I believe that saving money for the future is better than enjoy your money as soon as you earn it. Saving money for the future give you peace of mind. Also, if you have an emergency, such as medical problems or a family member die you will have a backup.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1462585034 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96854163911 2.67179642975 74% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6075773499 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.7916666667 100.406767564 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.25 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291344618727 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942673513159 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100488667117 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187216534465 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796992712096 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 11.7677419355 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.9 10.9000537634 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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