progress is always good
s progress always good? Scientific progress brings us many conveniences and advanced
machines, such as computers, automobiles, and so on. Progress seems to have made life more
simple and more comfortable. But if we analyze it carefully, we will find that progress is not
always good.
Modern industry brings us more convenient life. But at the same time, some problems appear. For
example, "the green-house effect" is a very serious problem that scientists try to solve it as early
as possible. It increases the earth temperature and some icebergs melt and the sea level becomes
higher and higher gradually. Maybe someday the sea will swallow some big cities nearby the sea.
Progress enhances the product efficiency, but it also brings us an other serious problem-pollution.
Pollution is so serious that ecological balance is damaged and many animals and plants lose their
living environment and become extinct eventually. The air is polluted and it is not suitable for
people. The water is also polluted and people are facing deficiency of drinking water in some
countries.
Progress makes the speed of life faster and faster because of the usage of computers and
automatic machines. People have to work faster than before and it makes them nervous. More
and more physical and psychological problems disturb people's life. Many people do not have time
for recreation.
From the above statements, it can be concluded that progress is not always good. It has its own
negative influences on our life. Maybe those problems can be solved by more progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: S
s progress always good? Scientific progre...
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Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'progress'.
Suggestion: always progress
s progress always good? Scientific progress brings us man...
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Line 11, column 65, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...oduct efficiency, but it also brings us an other serious problem-pollution. Pollution i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31496062992 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82665101842 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1410562988 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55 5.45110844103 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.53405017921 353% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28991343834 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116968500529 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.23838086304 0.0737576698707 323% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888603395488 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153551264541 0.0645574589148 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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