Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We make friends during our whole live and it is really important to keep them forever. They are who help us when we have a problem and most of the time they do it better than a family member so that is why I believe that is vital not only making new friends but also keeping the old ones. In the following essay, I will explain why I believe so.
First, friendship is priceless, is something that grow with the years and we have to work hard to keep it. When we get a new friend, we have to take care of it as our own family. I believe that we always can make new friends because there are people that appear in our live with a purpose, once they come into our lives, they stay forever. As a result, they become in our confidents or partners in crime. My personal experience is compelling example of this. About ten years ago, I had to move to New York City because of my work. There I did not know anyone so every day I after work I had to figure it out how to take the bus because I lived far away from my work. One day a coworker saw me walking to the bus station and he asked me why every day I had to do it. I explained to him that the reason was that I did not had a car and I lived far away Since that day my coworker take me to my home after work and also since then we started a great friendship that still remain.
Second, sometimes there are situations in our lives where your best friend of the years is the correct person to help you. Maybe in those situations not a family member is able to face it as a best friend can do it. For example, I remember when I was studying dentistry in Chicago Dental University I fail one of my classes. Nobody could know about that situation because was critical for me. The only person who helped me to face it was my best friend from my childhood. She advised me how to deal with the professors and also how to manage my financial situation to avoid lost my career. I will always remember the support that my best friend gave to me.
I conclusion, I would like to mention that both kind of friendship are important in our live, old friends and also new friends. Each one arrived to our live in a perfect time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, really, second, so, still, then, for example, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12441314554 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28168168819 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453051643192 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1040089556 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.85 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169369034909 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515356138062 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488209263444 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115349494042 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479584794869 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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