Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are many ways of art manifestation in the countries’ culture, such as painting, music, and dancing. In my view dancing is one of the most important in a culture and it plays a vital role in its development. I think so for two reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
First, there are different types of dancing, for example ballet, comp temporary dancing, folklore dancing and others. Every country has their own type of dancing and make the country’s culture unique. For instance, I am from Cuba. I remember when I was studying at the Alicia Alonso Ballet Academy. I went to a championship in South Africa, where every country should make a presentation about the influence of their culture in the dance. There were many dancers from different countries. Even though all of us were dancer, everyone had a particular way of dancing. For example, our performance was clean and showed the characteristics of our culture. Our movements were slow, we danced like the wind. However South African’s dancer movements were fast and they jumped like monkeys. As you can see dance plays an important role in a culture.
Secondly, dance plays an important role in a culture because it is pass from one generation to the future ones. Many countries such as Hawaii, Japan and Africa keep their culture alive through the dance. For example, in Hawaii still exits the famous dance called Kiwi. This have passed from one generation to the other one through the years. Last year I traveled to the Island and there were many tourists learning how to dance it. Also, I participated in the classes, were very funny and that I like most was the ripped skirts that they use to dance. During my trip, I learned a new culture and also a new type of dance that did not know before. Was a quite interested. As a result, I can prove that dance is important in every culture.
In conclusion, for all that I mentioned before I can tell that I agree that dancing plays an important role in a culture. It keeps the country’s culture alive and also people from other countries have the possibility of knowing her.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74324324324 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72839276866 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0030619073 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19923835032 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616264853459 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919503168639 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143677094126 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231569305976 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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