Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Different countries have various dances that allow us to get insight into the culture of nations. Although some people may think that dancing is not an essential part of the culture, I feel otherwise since they reflect traditions and show attachment to a group of people.
To begin with, dance is an excellent source of information about the culture of a country. Every nation has their own dances that exist for ages. They formed under unique conditions, believes, and cultural values that different groups of people have. Of course, dances do not stay permanent all of the time. Instead of it, they temporarily change. So dances provide a lot of information about the early years of a nation and the evolution of culture in a country. Besides that, customs play a role in every dance. For example, some ancient tribes used dances as a ceremony to ask Gods for rain or currying of a disease. This shows inextricable link between customs and dances that makes dances play a significant role in culture.
What is more, belonging to a group can be determined by using dances. Every dance has some pattern of movements that serves to transfer emotions or his intentions of the dancer to spectators or other dancers. If some people have the same pattern of dances as another group, that can mean that both of the groups are relatives in cultural meaning. For instance, there is a style of dances called street dance. The main followers of this style are youth and adolescents. As a result, the dance shows that people share the same cultural values.
To summarize, dances play a crucial role in culture, for they can say much about customs, traditions and also provide us with a way to determine groups of people with the same cultural background.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i feel, of course, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83056478405 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55371753977 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6911460448 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7777777778 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184888417676 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621891348025 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468074743594 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122007393336 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422317085116 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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