It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words Do not use memorized examples.
In the modern era, the relationship between success and life has raised a lot of debate among intellectuals. Some may hold the view that people should continue to succeed at any cost. However, others take an opposite viewpoint and believe that success is indeed the final goal of many people, but we should not sacrifice all we have to achieve it. I personally incline towards the latter opinion. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through some notable reasons.
My first reason and maybe the most important one is that by reading the stories written by many successful people we can realize that success is not a definite stage as we try to move towards our goals. Sometimes, we have to make many attempts to achieve it. We maybe could not reach any clear success in our movement. However, we are supposed to proceed further, even though we may encounter many failures. If people lose enthusiasm and cannot maintain a positive mood, they are less likely to reach the final goal they are pursuing. As a result, in my opinion, it is imperative to remain optimistic and patient as much as possible until reaching success. As we remain in a positive and optimistic mood, we are able to tackle potential problems and move further.
My second reason is that maybe life is just these few moments we live. Life is extremely shorter than we think. Humans should stay content because of their current belongings and should not expect to possess everything other people may have earned. From my point of view, those prosperous people whose properties seem charming may suffer from many physical or mental pains which torture them a lot. I don't know how they feel as I envy their possessions.
My last reason is that success is a multifaceted concept and it is not true to interpret only the money or power of someone as the determining factors of their success. Success has many elements and factors including happiness and contentment. While we are satisfied and jolly, we enjoy success to some extent. It happens to me that often I have fewer achievements compared to my friends. However, they have thought of me as a successful person just because of my positive mood.
In summary, I firmly believe that people should not lose their positive mood just because of a lack of success in their lives. Some arguments, like the necessity of continuing towards success despite many problems, enjoying a few seconds we live, and the multi-faceted nature of the success, are mentioned above. However, there are other reasons and examples challenging this claim, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I firmly believe that a happy life is more important than seemingly having success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ental pains which torture them a lot. I dont know how they feel as I envy their poss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, in summary, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86984815618 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6187091473 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509761388286 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.992637322 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3461538462 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7307692308 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57692307692 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1615642837 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500231174752 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454188166736 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097833201053 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408574186067 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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