It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
Generally speaking, the knowledge is a very crucial part in our life. It is important, because it helps people to live a better life. In my opinion, I think gaining a knowledge from experience is much important.
First, the books and the practical experience play a significant and unique role in our life in many aspects. One of the main aspects is that both of them expand your insight and provide you with good amount and quality of information that make you able to cope your problems in a professional manner. Moreover, the knowledge gaining from the books and the experience build a good, solid society by increasing the number of the educated people in the society. Hence, the educated people are able to express and convey their ideas and thought in a professional way. The veracity of this claim needs a meticulous observation can be illustrated in the body of the example. A few years ago, I got accepted in a pharmacy college. In this college we had a communication class. In this class, the professor taught us how to deal with a different kind of people based on their knowledge level. I remember I had a book, has a variety of way that make you professional while dealing with the people, which helps me a lot to understand the type of the relationships that I should consider while treating other people. But, I have noted that I had some weaknesses dealing with angry people. This problem had been resolved when I start practicing with my friends, who were playing a role as an angry people. After a few months, I was able to communicate and deal with all kinds of people.
Second, in contrast, the practical experience gives you an opportunity to get a better job. When you learn a new language for several years from the books, these books will not give you an enough information to be fluent in this language, you will need to practice in order to master this language and be professional at it. Which in turn going to help you to find a good job at any company as a translator of as an employment has a multi-languages. Which paly an important role to boost your salary.
By the way of conclusion, I am of the opinion that experience is much important as a source of knowledge than books for the reason mentioned above.
The veracity of this claim needs a meticulous observation can be illustrated in the body of the example
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: Which paly an important role to boost your salary.
Error: paly Suggestion: pay
flaws:
The second paragraph is too big which means the essays is not well organized.
Try this pattern:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2: First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3: Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing as First
Para 4: Third, a survey, conducted in UN ( or in a country, a school, a community), shows that A is better than B.... (here you can make a story)
Para 5: Conclusion.
An simple example (Eating at home or restaurant) for paragraph 2:
Para 2: First,reason 1 (1 sentence: Eating at home can save money) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences: I can prepare cheaper food from food market; I don't need to drive or take a bus to reach the restaurant; I don't need to pay tips...) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentence: for example, a sandwich can cost me $10 at restaurant, but it only cost me $5 at home.) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences: with the money I saved, I can buy a good book to read; I can use the money for a trip...).
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Score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 402 350
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No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.478 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.468 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.711 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.715 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.465 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.163 0.07
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