To develop a profound knowledge in a certain field is very important to succeed in life. One of the discussions about this subject is whether it’s more important to achieve this knowledge through books or life experience. In my opinion, even considering the value of life experience, it’s more important the knowledge learned from books since it give us an intellectual basis that permit us to be better prepared for life responsibilities.
One might say that life experience is more important than what we learn in books. A common example is the scenario where a person has a very good economical knowledge acquired from books, however this same person assumes an important role at a company and it’s not able to develop his knowledge in this job. In this sense, a lack of experience acquired from a life work could be the answer why this person was not able to develop a good job.
However, this kind of assumptions cannot be a way to generalize the idea that life experience is the better way to gain knowledge. It’s true that Steve Jobs didn’t finish his college and even though became the CIO of a company considered a giant in the technology field. However, Jobs did have a solid background based in years of studies that allowed him to develop his ideas in Apple. Imagine if Jobs didn’t have a background in computer science at all, how could he become able to create his computers without any knowledge learned from books and some college courses? Certainly, a basic background was necessary to him and he found it in many books.
In this context, books become an undergird that is very necessary. If one wants to succeed in professional life, one needs to be better prepared knowledge that could be obtained from books. Researches demonstrates that people without many years of studies tends to have jobs that doesn’t pay them well. Certainly, experience is also necessary, however, it’s not possible to develop knowledge based on experiences if we don’t have a background that allow us to start our careers. In this sense, a person that ignores what books can teach probably will not be well prepared for challenge not only in professional life, but in all other aspects.
In conclusion, one can say that books are the most important way to acquire knowledge. Through the knowledge learned from these important tools, we can become more prepared for life, since books always were a cornerstone for the development of our society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'profound knowledge'.
Suggestion: profound knowledge
To develop a profound knowledge in a certain field is very important to...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ooks. In this context, books become an undergird that is very necessary. If one wants to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97846889952 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81539512591 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44976076555 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2666784203 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.611111111 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267520958316 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916437445382 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060663109522 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167281001142 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388055125137 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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