It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Throughout the history, individuals have used a different kinds of entertainment to fill their leisure times. One of the best options which is attractive for most people is watching movies. Therefore, In my opinion, having a cinema near the resident house can be considered as an essential facility for every person. I have two main reasons for my viewpoint, which will be explored in the following essay.
First of all, most of the people work for a week, and they need to have good weekends to restore significant energy for next week. While some people prefer going club and drinking alcohol, which has numerous noxious side effects on the body, others like to watch a good movie with friends or family members in a movie theater. Although going to cinema is exciting action, it will be boring if we stock in a weekend traffic jam and maybe lost the movie because of that. So one important factor is the location of the cinema, and it will be great if it placed in our neighborhood. To explore my point of view, I am going to mention my own experience. We have a big entertainment center near our house, and there is a local movie theater in it. We are used to watching new arrival movies every Saturday in it with my family, and this makes our weekends an enjoyable one. A few years ago, when there was not any entertainment center near our house we had to use lots of gas and spend a lot of our precious time in traffic in order to see a movie. Therefor, because of it, we hadn’t gone to cinema very much before the time that they established the local center.
Secondly, imagine a city with a few cinema complexes in it; you always are going to struggle with booking a ticket, which is really annoying. On the other hand, if you have lots of local cinema centers near your accommodation, it will be an easy action to reserve some tickets for yourself and your friends. My own experience is a compelling reason for this reality. Four years ago we went on a vacation to a city in the north of Iran. Although we had a great time in that city, one day we decided to go and watch Batman’s new movie together. After asking local people about cinema centers, we found out there is only one in the city and we need to book a ticker from the internet. After searching for the cinema's website, we realized there is no empty seat for about ten days, and we were not going to be able to see the movie in that city. On that trip, I understood the importance of having different movie theater in a town for that city’s residents and tourists.
To make the long story short, according to the aforementioned arguments having a local cinema in each neighborhood can help people to have a great opportunity to fill their free times with their family and friends. The more cinema exist in a city, the easier it is to book a ticket, and the less stocking in a traffic jam for individuals when they have a plan to watch a movie in a movie.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
...tory, individuals have used a different kinds of entertainment to fill their leisure ...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
... with a few cinema complexes in it; you always are going to struggle with booking a ticket...
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Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...l people about cinema centers, we found out there is only one in the city and we ne...
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Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cinemas'' or 'cinema's'?
Suggestion: cinemas'; cinema's
...m the internet. After searching for the cinemas website, we realized there is no empty ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42329020333 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51908775351 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473197781885 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2529337657 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.043478261 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5217391304 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110256761561 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376206632707 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327595218425 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068534108725 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260984076981 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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