It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
It’s known that it is a period of rapid pace and tons of events are happening in the world when I am writing this essay and we have access to know most of them easily and conveniently thanks to the internet. Under this circumstance, some people hold the opinion that knowing what is happening around the world is important to today’s people while others regard it as a waste of time. From my perspective, I am in favor of the first one since getting in touch with international news can open our minds and help us determine what we want to dive into in the future.
Firstly, it is a wonderful meaning to broaden our horizons by knowing events happening over the world. To begin with, when we are trying to know what is happening in the world, it is inevitable to be exposed to cultures from other countries, like different habits of food and costume styles. It is a treasure for us to have a picture of how people from other countries communicate and what other countries are like before traveling abroad. Besides, knowing events happening elsewhere can cultivate a cross-culture notion in our mind, encouraging us to consider more carefully and internationally when we face multi-culture problems in work, helping us avoid making some critical mistakes.
Secondly, knowing what the outside world is like can help us mature faster and determine the fields we are willing to be occupied in the future. What should be mentioned is that some youngers living in a developed country may hold a partial understanding of the world. They like to waste time and money on drinking and gambling since they consider that there is no need for them to make efforts. However, if they have seen those homeless children hanging on the pumped road with worn clothes, they are supposed to realize how lucky they are and be galvanized to study and work harder to improve the world. Furthermore, knowing events from the world is supposed to help us know the trend of the world, determining a more promising field to devote ourselves to.
Admittedly, information from the internet contains too many things irrelevant to us. Searching and finding those worthy of reading costs a lot of time. Besides, irrelevant information is indeed likely to distract us, wasting our time. From this aspect, trying to know events happening in the world is a waste of time.
However, I believe that knowing events happening in the world has more benefits than harms. Maybe it costs time today, but it is going to open your mind and contributes to your promising career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81506849315 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67984114265 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493150684932 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5343886146 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24282845022 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876507610733 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703948059201 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147446792094 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042261357689 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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