The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Nowadays, people are living in a society of rapid pace, bearing stress from both work and lives. Therefore, it is worthwhile to find a suitable way for us to relax and reduce stress. From my perspective, I totally agree with some people's opinion that spending time alone is the best way to relax because I believe that remaining a piece of time for ourselves enables us to clarify our minds as well as relieves us of social stress, relaxing your tight nerves very much
Firstly, spending time alone allows us to clarify our thoughts. We are more likely to concentrate on ourselves rather than the complex outside world when we are alone, contributing to the peace of our mind. In contrast, most of the time, it is the requirements of others, like your boss and your supervisor, that drive you to work, which leaves little space for you to explore the inside of yourself. After a long time, worries about your requirements in mind, like dreams, accumulate and lead to considerable stress. I had experienced a period of time like what I illustrated above and the method I adopted to relax was taking a break and writing something about my feeling at that moment. Words written by your hands is going to transform your anxiety from intangible to touchable and readable, which provides you with opportunities to face it and then beat it. It is the way that helps me overcome many obstacles.
Secondly, spending time alone enables us to get rid of social stress. It is known that communicating with others actually consumes a lot of energy and time, which also leads to stress. Thus, it is a good way for us to get rid of such kind of stress by spending a piece of time alone. You can take up your hobbies which you put aside when you are occupied. According to my preference, I prefer to ride a bike. It is a fancy sport since two wheels can take you everywhere glorious. Furthermore, you are going to be so concentrated on riding that stress is going to be left behind in the wind.
To conclude, I believe that spending time alone after a period of busy time can truly relax you from stress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... perspective, I totally agree with some peoples opinion that spending time alone is the...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...onsiderable stress. I had experienced a period of time like what I illustrated above and the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in contrast, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58510638298 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60479217627 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515957446809 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4254986851 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.411764706 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383090301831 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117210010322 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128469736333 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27976097083 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110441112348 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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